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Anonymousover 12 years agoSee in the dark?
I liked the story although it moved a bit fast.
One question though, "How could Sara abd piper see anything in a tent, in the dark in a campground? If they used a light in the tent, anyone outside would know what was going on."
Anonymousover 12 years agoFind an editor
It could be a hot story but your phrasology and grammer are REALLY bad.
ohnudeonealmost 15 years agoNice start.
Fun start. Look forward to seeing the next instalment of this tale.
Doctor_Teasealmost 15 years agoWhat, no Piper-on-Sara action?
Hoping the girls get a little more involved with each other in the next chapter!
Nate2301almost 15 years agoGood Start
Nice set up for what should be a good series. Please, keep writing.
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