All Comments on 'Camping Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Moved too fast

There was too little build up so I never really got into it. Even the story was kind of average. Nothing special and too porn sounding.

Invisible2uInvisible2uabout 14 years ago
Beautiful...

...simply beautiful. Well done!

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