by HarryPerry
I would score you 101 if it was possible . Your attention to detail is exciting and adds to the tension . I didn't expect Ch. 2 so soon but I'm pleased it was there . Keep the chapters coming as I feel this relationship is going to last well after the trip is over .
I read from time to time but never comment, however your story is very well written and the story line better than most..
keep it up.... You have my attention...
Simply fantastic story - as good as anything I have read here in a long long time. And my cock is just as hard as Daddy's - waiting to explode at just the right moment
Please - don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter
Could you please give that poor man some relef some where. He should have blue balls by now. I do love The story it is HOT and You are one dam great writer.
AMAZING STORY! please dont let the father give in too easily. maybe a handjob first?
great story dad needs to bend her over a log and fuck the shit out of her cock teasing ass
Easily one of the top ten all-time stories on literotica. You have the ability to envelop the reader in your story-telling without making everything sexual, as most good writers. I'm looking forward to a continuation of this story.t
This father you have made is surely having the most confused moment of his life.
Good story. I like Chapter 2, particularly at the end where Jennifer obviously needs to masturbate and she just does it there, nude and in the countryside with her dad nearby, and with no inhibitions. She masturbates with absolutely no shame. In fact she is proud of what she is doing. She is just amazing