All Comments on 'Camping with Rob'

I hope you continue with the story, would love to know what happens when they get back to the office.

This may be the first time I've ever said this when commenting about a Literotica story, but I want more of the plot! Suddenly skipping over the rest of the trip left me feeling a little cheated. Surely you could have written at least one more day's worth of canoeing -- if for no other reason than that it would give you the chance to write another sex scene at the end of it.

Continue the story please! Loved it so far.

I agree with the previous post, you could have drawn it out and given us another day on the river. The sex was hot but I would have enjoyed just more of the plot even without the sex. Please continue and let us know what happens when they get back to the city!

I hate when people don't put chapter 1. I hope this isn't the end of this story! I love the twist that he isn't married. Great story so far

Great story, and I liked the little twist at the end lol.

Very hot -- I went from semi-hard to raging hard when the cum was pounded out of him. I want more. Nice job!

I happened to click on your name to see who it was that was leaving such flattering comments about my own stories, and when I saw that you were also a writer I decided to check one of your stories out. This is really really good stuff, and that isn't just a reciprocal compliment, because it's a nice sunny morning and I wasn't planning on spending it reading and massaging myself under the keyboard, but that's life. Bravo!

I hope this is the end. I love the ending what a nice twist...

What an awesome story. Made me wish I was camping with a stud right now!!!

hoped for more.?

Worth the wait, but need, more ;).

Great story, but I have to say that calling a man's asshole a "pussy" is distracting. Men do not have pussies. Do gay males really refer to each other's parts this way? To me it is kind of like calling their partner a female. A kind of denial that they are fucking a man (making it seem less "gay"). That aside, I really enjoyed the story. More please?

It's just odd and incorrect to call an anus a "pussy," no matter who it's on. But I enjoyed reading this story, wish there was more.

I've heard and used it multiple times when talking about men's anus so it's perfectly fine to me. Another great story

Good story but could have illustrate better at the ending... the fuck next night n how Rob confess in detail his lusting over Luke and vice versa and then fuck the shit out of each other... the job promotion ... and their relationship...how it go forward n develop into romantic relationship etc..

This uncertain future Luke is facing during his flight in the corporate jet back to New York makes me wonder what comes next.

Please don't leave us in suspense. It's such an exciting story, Luke getting who he was lusting after. But now we are left wondering if he and Rob will last - after all "the company frowns on familiarity and unsupervised fraternization between staff members". And will Luke get promoted after all ?

Please give us a sequel to this story.

Your stories are all wonderful, but this one seemed as if you should make it a series. Or at least give us a follow up chapter on how these two guys are doing. You can't jusr say, "And now I'm flying back home, uncertain about my future," if the character is uncertain, then the readers are definitely uncertain. I think this story was great, and was definitely hot as fuck. But I'd like to know what happens when they get home. Im a fellow author on this site, and I always find myself coming back to your stories. I know writing can be time consuming. But, if you get the chance, please add another chapter to this story.

That took me out of the story and ruined the sex scene. Ruined a perfectly good story.

Great story. Please continue with it, I would like to know how they get on after what they had camping🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

Total turnoff to call a guys ass a pussy. I want to fuck a man's ass not a pussy. What if some straight guy eats his girl out she wants her clit licked and says suck my cock. Weird.

AAnother great story from a talented, sexy author!

Y'all should let Luke call his hole a pussy if he thinks of it as his pussy. His hole, his choice...

I think this story needs a better ending.

Wow, what a spin/turn near the ending of the story.....There was a bit of a head spin for me when the storyline turned so quickly with Rob & Luke in the tent...I had to re-read a few times.....I do believe it was because how well the earlier portions of the story were easily followed as if I were with the characters throughout...."well done, by the way". I believe, (my opinion only), is that some of the other comments that I've read through regarding your story are from those with less open minds regarding relationship(s)....I say this for one simple fact in that your story is more like an actual "REAL-LIFE" encounter of an budding/loving relationship....

Sorry I am not the best at expressing myself, that is why I am NOT a writer.....Keep up the good work and suggest addition chapters to such an exciting storyline.....

Jynny

Pussy? Not .

I'm not too keen on the term pussy used in the stories. But that's me , not you(or the characters) aside from that a good story and wonder where it goes from here? Can't wait.