All Comments on 'Can I Give You a Hand? Ch. 01'

Good story.Please continue with the heterosexual theme and less homo stuff.

What a delightfully...specific superpower. Can't wait to see what you do with it.

Very interesting and specific storyline...though I'm not sure it falls under Mind Control, exactly...seems more of a sci fi, it's a physical reaction, not a mental one. That said, please continue on in whatever direction your story unfolds, not one bent on some anonymous, biased person. And for anyone who questions my sexual preference, my preference is - yes, please. :)

The story is pretty good but this "homo" stuff you allude to is strictly experimentation with his powers. As for the auto fellatio it too was a solution to a problem. I'm sure the next chapters will bear tis out.

It's your first story but I hope it isn't your last.

Very original and well written, please continue. Panther fan.

Man... This was good

Not mind control, but still good

Until he freaking started to suck (his) dick, while continiously telling himself "I'm not a gay"

Are you making him a gay in secret of himself?

hey all

ta for the generally positive feedback. Having read stories on this forum for years, I thought I should give back as well. I will definitely add the 'sci-fi' tag. The 'homo' stuff is more Tim questioning his sexuality, as most teenagers would at some time.

There will be more chapters!

Do they think it impresses? Or it will help others read their rantings?

(Or do they feel threatened, snicker?)

Do they read an entire story in an area called Mind Control and think they are supposed to control other minds?

I have neither the curiosity, or ability to suck my own cock!!!