All Comments on 'Can I Love? Ch. 03'

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virgin2267 about 17 years ago

I like this story

Hey, this guy kind of makes you wonder if he is up to something. I mean already telling her he loves her and then going to her father behind her back. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to see if he's really genuine.

I'm really liking this story.

Nightowl22 over 16 years ago

Yep, unusual.

It kinda reminds me of the story of the suitor that comes on like Tom to a girl because he has found out she is an heiress, something even she doesn't know yet.. But that may be only a similarity.. He apparently, knows her from before their first encounter, though.. We have to hope our heroine doesn't get more emotional scars.. Good story!