All Comments on 'Can I Love? Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I enjoyed this

though with a touch of editing it would be even better. Good job.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 16 years ago
A good story

A very playful chapter.. Now it appears they will will be the revelation that is necessary to help him understand her "moods".. Maybe he can help her, after all??

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