All Comments on 'Can I Watch?'

cute little vignette.

Good premise.

Needed more involvement from her. Once her chest was bare, why no attempt at a titty fuck so she could experience what it was like.

Why didn't she play with her own tits/nipples?

Could have used more dialog during handjob and blowjob about how it felt to each.

Four stars.

really nice story, would love to read a second part.

Pretty good, definitely needs a sequel

Loved it!

Fill out the next chapter with more dialog of their respective feelings and sensations.

Great story. Needs a part 2 and 3.

Very well done. I agree there needs to be a follow-up chapter. Or two.

Great Story and would make a great scene in a movie. thank you

Definitely a new look at friendship. Hard to find a new angle like this. The last sentence didn’t fit. Were it not there I would have voted a 5 & not a 4.

Bill S.

This was pretty sweet. The trust that was displayed was amazing.