All Comments on 'Cancelled Date Night Ch. 04'

Great writing for a first (or thirty-first) time. Maybe, if Dave and Colleen stop questioning themselves and grow comfortable with (and in!!!) each other, Dave could learn to love having Colleen "in him" while Sarah rides his face!

Haven't had much time lately to think about where this is going but I've a few ideas in mind for when I eventually get more time to dedicate to it.

I'm a fan of this suggestion, it's definitely one way I'd love the story to go. Hopefully I can get to work on it soon...