All Comments on 'Cancun Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I'm so spent!

Going through the new subs, I clicked on #6, read a few paragraphs, and it caught me enough to check out 1 through 5. Please keep this one going... you've done a great build up, opening up awesome possibilities for the rest of their vacation and beyond. And thanks for the literate, easy to read writing style- it just makes it all the more pleasurable to read.

Thanks, looking forward to so much more.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
part 6

i waited three years for part 6,and what a letdown!!!

it feels like a different author without a ounce of care and love for his

protagonists,what a shame.

i am not going to read anymore parts of this story,i will stay with parts 1-5

thank you very much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
love it

I was checking random stories and landed on part 3, I went back and read 1 through 6, please keep this series going, it got me through 2 hrs of a boring morning at work. Posibly another forceful/rape session after she gets dad jealous about that dudes massive dick from part 6? Just saying lolz. Keep up the good work. :)

unicorn64unicorn64about 10 years ago

Will there be more?

chairfanchairfanabout 3 years ago

REALLY disappointed that this wasn't concluded in a neat way; from the author's page it doesn't look like they're active either :'(

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