All Comments on 'Candice, the Crime Stopper'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

That was a lot of fun. I.want.more. Uhrm. Maybe she can find out that the other girl is really her long lost twin, nearly quit her job because of guilt, then decide against it because of all the attention and presents she's getting after the 'incident' and rather choose breaking her sister out of jail to make up for being insensitive. They can then go on rape-romps together and scare the children. In neighbouring towns, of course. Just a suggestion... Evebroughtanaxthistime

Marklynda2Marklynda211 months ago

Walking home naked? I'm surprised she didn't become a victim herself. Fun story. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.