All Comments on 'Candy'

I hope you have a sequel in mind? You could track their progress, like does Alexis start getting younger as well as hotter & sexier.

This has the possibility of being a very hot story. I haven't read a sex scene yet between these 3 so looking forward to that and from the effects of the "candy" some babies too.

KEEP IT GOING,THIS WAS NO WAY TO END A STORY. KEEP THIS UP AND WILL HAVE NO READERS. AT LEAST HAVE ONE MORE PART........... THANKS ????????

Must have a sequel or more. Maybe they become younger? More fertile? Wedding?

I hop part 2 is in the works.

But needs a little more to have it flow. Action seems stilted. Speech is like an english essay. You need it to sound like someone is actually talking. People shorten words or conjoin them.

Saying all that, I did enjoy the story and look forward to reading more of your work.