All Comments on 'Candy Hearts - 750 Words'

Hope their date goes well!

5

Nice!

Well done. It's hard to fit a whole story in 750 words and few on this site can pull it off. 4.7*

Nice little story. The mystery is fun.

You pulled it all together and have a great little story. Thanks.

Sweet, short mystery. I liked this very much! Thanks for the great start to my day!

Cute.

This is so jr high and hardly romance. Zero erotica. HATE THESE 750 CHALLENGES AS THEY ARE A WASTE OF TIME. Even the most experienced writers never make it worth reading as there is no chance for true development of even the smallest segment of interaction for erotica/romance. It would make more sense if they did a 1500 word challege not counting any words less than 3 letters. Not even the folks behind Literotica could meet the challenge of 750 words or less with any success.

I really enjoyed this cute, quick, lighthearted story.

Thanks!

Very nice, --- and I like nice!

You sneaky guy! Now that's a winner at least if I had a vote.

Cheers and best luck in the contest!

SAGE

Yeah, cute. Liked it. And Hey - "Anonymous" - If you hate these 750-word things and they're so worthless, WHY THE FUCK do you keep reading them? Move on and stop bitching! And if your gonna carp so much, have the guts to put your name, or at least your pseudonym on them! Own your words and stop hiding behind "Anonymous."

Fun. Clever. Well phrased and written. Made my whole day. Thank you so much. 5*

Brought a smile. Very well done.

Very nicely done for a 750-word challenge. I find it interesting that it didn't seem like it could be the one woman he initially thought, but it was. Hats off to the main character for thinking to use his webcam to get a clue, and it worked.

I trust there will be a follow-up as this sweet little story works well.

I'm pleased to see the good comments, not all stories have to have rampant rogering, 66kkkk breasts and 18" truncheons.

Cute and sweet. Ignore the hater. Writing a good story in 750 words (or even fewer, for those who write a lot of flash fiction) is an art. Does it say everything? No. But it lets the reader add their own thoughts to it to make it whole.

Well, let's see:

DITTO: LitCrit (in particular) , Cali_Love and W_P_314159.

Truncheon?" Sounds like a Brit! 🫡

As I noted other_wheres, the comments are often as good as the stories being commented upon. I love 'em all!

To you, Trionyx, kudos for a brilliant piece of artful writing! 5🌟s

How can we vote on basic exposition?

Sweet and short! Great.

That would certainly set the stage. 😁

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So sweet! Very good.

Adorable story

Cute.

This was insanely cute! and well done realizing a full story within such a tight constraint. 5*

5🌟. I'm late again. I wondered if anyone would ask for part 2, And they didn't disappoint.

Use your imagination folks.

Maybe she's a sex bomb and going to wear him ragged?

Or a shy romantic and the take months and a ring before the ever get between the covers?

Or maybe their date crashes and burns and...