by curvy_cate
Not that my opinion matters but I personally enjoyed this story. Usually, I don't prefer the girls to have such a willingness to please their daddy. As this, typically, doesn't seem like the natural reaction to such a scenario. At least, not to me. However, the writer of this common, taboo-themed story, managed to create more of a fairy-tale, fantastic fantasy with a bit of a daydreaming appeal to it. Suprizingly the way you wrote this piece gave me the permission that I needed, to thoroughly enjoy, even the , otherwise, usual and regularly unattractive and unrealistic aspects throughout the storyline. It was fairly short though. I believe if you.had stretched it out a bit longer. (Perhaps build upon daddys anger a bit more, and maybe, as well as, the forced play) then more of an edging effect could take place for the readers. Otherwise, Well done. 3.5 stars/5 stars
Thank God it's not finished cause the writer probably have the dad return with his buddies and a few neighborhood boys and let them all have a turn or some stupid shit like that
Regardless of his excuse he is still a NGPoS--Which stands for a No Good Piece of Shit
daddy really outsmarted her with his brand of punishment... that was a pretty neat twist at the end, well done.
Come on. You have to finish this story. Let her Daddy Cherry her. Then, maybe add one of her girlfriends.
Rjay