All Comments on 'Can't We Let Him Stay? Pt. 01'

Just NO !!

Burn Callum!!!!

Another wimpy cliched cuck story …. Hope this does a 180 degree turn around - that would make it somewhat interesting

Stupid just idiotic.

are you fucking kidding me, this is a very stupid story, nobody (maybe you) is that lame please stop now before you embarrass yourself further, 0 stars

Just end this freaking mess now. Don't even bother with a second chapter! This tired old filthy rag of a meme has been so overused, wrung out, and wiped up to much of the bully's bodily fluids. The bully who comes back into the lives of the young couple to haunt their happiness is STALE! it's become predictable.

• Callum the bully caused grief for Sarah and Liam all through school, emotionally scarring them,

• Sarah and Liam fall in love and are about to be wed,

• Callum shows up out of nowhere on some thinly stretched notion of apologizing for his past behavior,

• Callum barges in, making himself at home, begins to intimidate Liam, and sexualize Sarah,

• Liam being a brain dead moron lacks two neurons to rub together to form a cogent thought,

• Instead of calling 911 and requesting police for an intruder and filing a formal report,

• Liam twists his hands together and angsts over Callum's behavior,

• and Liam positively twists his guts in a knot over Sarah's very sudden, 180° turn regarding the suddenly 'not so bad of a guy' Callum and his new found interest in her!

Amazing how the females in these stories about confrontation with past bullies always suddenly seem to find the good in them? Callum could have killed Sarah's little sister, burned down her house, stolen her family blind! But when he suddenly and unexpectedly shows up at her door, and tells her she has great looking tits? All of a sudden he's Prince Charming and Liam is Alpo! Still not worth a 1.

What a poor story , so many bad cliché

Thanks for the tags. 1☆ without reading the story.

Just when you think the writing could not get worse.

Maybe we have just reached the 99% of the LW tales following the femdom menhater fetish-cuck propaganda.

Really? Why the need to make him so stupid? Wasn't that enough punishment? Why the need to make a bullying guy show up at his door? Why the need for a part two of this shit?

Oh pleeese!

Great copy of so many others on here. Two bullied victims fall in love then the guys bully comes back into the picture to fuck the girl. Very original.

Time to move on buddy. Pack your stuff while they’re ‘busy’ and head out. No note, no phone calls, just move on. She’s not worth it.

Must be insane.

So bad it does not warrant a comment . Dont give up your day job you will need it to survive.

Cuck and slut

High school graduates are indeed old enough to drive. And jobs don’t “play well” they “pay well”. And they live together but he’d never seen her boobs? WTF? This story just doesn’t hold together at any level.

Beyond stupid.

Let me guess, you gonna pull something generic and overused plot like Sarah fuck Callum before Mc and Mc gonna let them walking all over him and doing nothing right?

Trash

Oh for fucks sakes! Why did you write her to be retarded? And this whole moving together bullshit. God, I hate stories that insult the reader and this one does from the first word to the last.

Walk into the bedroom and start carrying all my stuff out and stack it by the door. When she asks what I'm doing? Just say him or me, one of us is leaving and not coming back.

She has to be in on his visit. Why else would she be so open with Callum? If Liam were smart, he would forget about proposing and dump her now. That been said, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

1/5, only because can't be ZERO............

Too much like a set up. Obviously she's already doing the other guy. MC is just there to pay the bills.

Just nasty! Stupid woman!

If she gives in, let Liam walk away with his pride intact.

Bad premise, really bad writing.

Slutbwife stories can be great. This was just nonsense

Very hot having a smug asshole bully showing up and manhandle the girlfriend. Can't wait for Liam to become a wimpy cuckold when Callum takes her in every hole. Liam needs lots more humiliation and accept that only Callum gets her pussy while Liams role becomes cleanup bitch.

All we're asking triangletoast is that you give Liam his dignity back. If your gender doesn't have balls that's ok! Nowadays you're apparently allowed to grow them! So please do so and give a pair to Liam while you're at it. Make Liam's life worth living... with or without Sarah, and put Callum in a back alley dumpster where jerks like him belong.

Just stupid. Wimp. Do better.

A story needs at least a modicum of believability therefore this is not a story, just a group of drivel.

Another story about a wimp.

This story was bad enough on CYOA.

You have written an awful plot very well. If you could just get your story telling skills up to your writing skills you'd be well worth reading. As it stands you have created the stupidest, most unbelievable characters I've ever read and believe me, I've read a lot of them.

If you've read LW very long, you know it hurts me to say anything bad about a fellow writer, but this....Unbelievable!

Horrible attempt at who knows what. Not sure why anyone would write such a weak story line but I managed to get through a page and a half. From that point I could care less what transpired. weak!

You or her, one of you is moving out

this took all the worst parts of the other 2 parter and put took out all the good parts

please do part 3 of the maid story! the gf in that was amazing and smart and clearly a cool switch!

Too many spelling mistakes and no real clarity for Liam to see that he was fucking his girlfriend. Proofread first so that the story make sense to you.

Stuuuuuuuupid. Completely unbelievable. Only chance at redemption is Liam growing at least one ball...... I mean, come on!

One of the dumbest SOBs I ever heard of. In high-school I was bullied some. It was never over a girlfriend because I wasn't interested in the dating game because I was to busy. After graduation a couple years I started dating a girl that I had been watching for a few years. I was actually best friends with her brother. After dating her for her for a while I learned that she had been waiting for me to ask her out. I later asked her to marry me and she said yes. After being married a few years the asshole returned to our area. We were out with friends having fun dancing, drinking a little and visiting. The asshole showed up. Yes after while he came to our table. He had to run his mouth like he did in school putting me down. I was getting pissed. Anne my wife squeezed my arm under the table. A signal for me to settle down. I looked at her and smiled. Asshole said Anne baby how about I have a dance or two. She looked at me and she knew the look. Maby another time. He said come on squirt won't mind will you stubby? He grabbed her arm and pulled. I jumped up and said let go asshole. He went to shove me and I put my knee to his crouch. He bent over just as my second knee came up and hit him in the face. He stumbled backwards and fell on his back. I stood at his side saying saying the Hell away from us asshole the next time I won't be so nice. He has avoided us every since. Rude asshole nothing pissed me off more.

Try again!

The slut and asshole would already have been history on the first page.

Try writing a little more realistically.

WTF? I skipped to the comments after the first page. Unreadable.

No hagas caso de los tontos que vienen solo a insultar. Esperando la parte 2

Really well written and paced. I didn't want it to end. Can't wait for the next installment. 5 thoroughly deserved stars.

What a load of unbelievable shite. You really have to have it half way believable

Crap, just crap. How on earth would this appeal to any normal person, male or female. The high school bully returning is one of the most overused tropes on LW. The male is always a complete waste of space or a newly made macho man. The woman is invariably now gorgeous and either struck by the slut ray or a vacuous bimbo bowled over by the high school stud.

Rubbish

He should pack up over night and leave. Take the ring and cash it in. She is not worth another second of his time.

As humor, it's kinda funny in a ridiculous way. As a serious story it sucks, dump the bitch and run!

People here read cuckold story without loving this king of story. One of the best I read for several years. Hope to see the other parts🙏

Shoot him.

This is inspired from that CHYOA one right? Love your work!

An umpteenth totally irrealistic femdom cheating-cuck fantasy, with a brainless sheep husband and an immature narcissistic whore wife. Regular thing in this category.

"People here read cuckold story without loving this kind of story."

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Maybe not. Since about 99% of the LW tales are now femdom-cuck-raac tales, the vast majority of the LW readers are just expressing their dislikement to these fetish fantasies without reading them: just a quick skim, the tags and the negative rating.

Well apparently Liam doesn't know Sarah as well as he thought he did. But to save poor Liams dignity he should leave Sarah and Callum there and take the ring back getting his money back and finding a place of his own to live. Don't turn Liam into a wimpy, whiney cuck.

Love the story, please release part 2 asap.

This seems like another story written using AI and they are really poorly written

Cuck always lets the bitch whore have her way.

Princess Sarah must be eating Batshit Crazy Pie, she is showing the symptoms ingesting one. Likewise, she will be showing symptoms of exposure to Callumnesium, usually it is obvious after about four months as the abdominal region begins to swell. Liam the Brain Dead Cuck is just delusional and obviously hallucinating that he has a real loving relationship with Sarah. Sarah just sees Liam as L.I.A.M., that's Lifetime Income After Matrimony.

TriangleToast, you want to write a story based on real human emotions and reality of cause and effect? Then have Liam take charge of his life and lose Sarah and make Callum's life a living hell.

This is stupid lol. I mean there’s naive but she’s blatantly allowing a dude to grope her after two minutes in front of her husband who hasn’t even seen her naked boobs yet ? Come on lol

What a loser, Liam must be the stupidest fool on the planet, what a set up.

Great story, looking forward to the next installment

Do you also eat the cum out of her pussy when your wife fucks other guys in front of you? You willing cuckolds are the lowest form of life.

Absolute bull shit. No one is that dumb, not even in stories.

I’d just of said ok you want him to stay move in with him, I’m leaving for good we are officially done . Goodbye hope you two enjoy each other

don't know why the hate for this story lol I enjoyed it a lot!

This is way over the top , or topless in Callums case , funny . I couldn’t help but get cracked out , I mean up , by this humorous tale .

Good

This is amazing! Please keep writing! You're an awesome writer and I love the premise. Not enough stories like this and you definitely fit a niche. Can't wait to see more from you! Thanks!

Definitely keep this going! I love the naivety! Love it!

How much longer of a wait in part 2?

Really awesome! Please keep writing!

Terrible ⭐️

Hot!!

There is usually a few days between stories by this brilliant author. I can’t wait much longer.

Wow

Too stupid for words, no one would permit that stuff.