by TriangleToast
Stop treating hubby like he’s a 14 yr old kid. Seriously, it’s annoying as hell.
Jesus how stupid do you have to be not to trust your own senses. Just give her a kiss on the cheek, tell her it was nice while it lasted, wish her a good diner with Cullen, then wish her a good life, leave her pack your shit and go on with your life. Done…that’s it…
Liam is a pure beta boi while Cal is an alpha dominant smug prick who will own Sarah's pussy and Liam will willingly accept it.
Your story actually depresses me, because I’m sure that somewhere on this planet there are two dumb kids being preyed upon like these kids. Dad entrusted his son with a good work ethic, a bottle of whiskey and not much else.
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The girl is practically begging to get enslaved into sex traffick, and the guy is clueless how to prevent it.
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You can say “don’t take it seriously!” all you want, but so far I don’t see anything to be happy about, either.
Rendered hapless, being a doormat, and proving yourself spineless and gutless is NOT sexy. These are symptoms of a deeper issue.
I feel bad for Liam, Sarah is just turning into a slut right before his eyes.Art has a ready fucked her and he doesn’t have a clue.
I think Anonymous said it correctly;
Anonymousabout 5 hours ago
Jesus how stupid do you have to be not to trust your own senses. Just give her a kiss on the cheek, tell her it was nice while it lasted, wish her a good diner with Cullen, then wish her a good life, leave her pack your shit and go on with your life. Done…that’s it…
Gee lets see how dumb you can make poor liam be. Does he even know how ti spell cuckld? Dont think you can make him a bigger fool; and his gurlfriend suddenly turns into the town slut over the school bullys big dick. Who would have thought that.
The comments always make me laugh out loud. These guys know how the story is going to go in the first half a page, and despite a professed dislike of the genre read the entire thing and then take the time to write an obnoxious comment.
Keep writing, I like the story and apparently the anon haters do as well. Don’t worry, they’ll read the next one too.