All Comments on 'Captain Brie'

by Wifetheif

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redpoppiesredpoppiesalmost 3 years ago

Sorry, I didn't realize that this was a story about abusing women. That stuff does not figure in my fantasies at all.

thomas_deanthomas_deanalmost 3 years ago

The Gilded Cage

Captain Brie Howard, commander of a space ship, is sent to negotiate a treaty. Her navigator fluent in the local language sells her as a prize to the pasha where she's quickly advances to first concubine. Tumbling from a world where women are in positions of power into a more traditional society where women serve their masters, Brie at first resists the splendor of her surroundings, bur in short order becomes caught in the intoxicating vapors of its advantages. The erotic elements support the story line and are consistent with the character of the characters Wifetheif has conjured up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderfully descriptive, can’t wait to read more

Janrene3Janrene37 months ago

Well... The highly trained Captain could have chosen another translator than the highly chauvinistic male, She brought with her?! A man Who didn't hide his disloyality, mind you.

And She could choke the Pasha to a near death and try to escape by threatening to kill him. Very, very Dangerous indeed, but it seems to be her only chance of escape?

But a funny try of finding another angle, 4 stars for the try!

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