All Comments on 'Captive Audience'

this is a little far fetched, good thing this is just a story they should have though of this before they started it

This story is horrible, the writing, the story structure and really even the storyline itself. Just a bit over the top.

This story is lacking. It really needed an editor for grammar as well as a feasible plot and some life experience for the sex scenes. Keep trying though, just remember to make a plot outline and check and recheck everything!

The actions against the boyfriend - why? Which begs the question again, why? To the final solution in the end.