by Wifetheif
But that's about it. It is well written (as your stries usually are). A princess is captured, turned into a sex slave, learns to accept and later embrace her life as a sex slave. Is that it? Is something else going to happen to her? If not then there isn't much left to her story. I have enjoyed many of your stories and been repulsed by others, but I've always been captivated in some way by them. You are an unusually good story teller; so I don't understand the point of this story. What is going to happen to her? Does she remain a slave (boorrring!!) ? Does she rebel? Escape? Get freed by some government official who falls in love with her and wants to marry her? Get pregnant (no surprise there; kind of expected)? Freed by rebels from her old country seeking independence and needing a figurehead to rally around? There's got to be more than just what we've read so far! Where's the adventure? Intrigue? Conflict?
*smiles*
Another excellent chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens when she meets the male slave..... Keep up the wonderful storyline.