All Comments on 'Captured by the Elves Ch. 05'

Thank you for writing this, notbreckenridge, I really enjoyed reading it. I hope that we won't have to wait as long before Chapter Six is posted.

Honestly, I had somewhat lost hope that this series would be continued. I'm very glad I didn't, though. I can't wait to see what escapades William (or whatever his [her? their? hir?] new name will be) gets into. Excellent chapter!

Also, after going back and rereading the previous chapters, I see that Raina's name is rather fitting after all.

Love this work. Glad the chapters are continuing again.

Thank you all for the kind words. The next part should be up soon.

I absolutely loooove these stories! I actually registered and created a Literotica account solely to be able to highly rate the stories and to be able to leave you a comment expressing my profound appreciation! I can't wait to see not only where this story goes, but possibly where you take the world as whole that you've created! Thank you again and keep up the amazing work! <3

Finally its done,i am happy for her

I think it was very rude of the friend to not let him do the final male penetration. Absolutely shameless of him and that after he gave him a new name.

About time, I did think it was a bit different that it was Brandon/Raina that triggered William’s change. It was appropriate though. You just bumped my rating up to the highest I’ve given a story before… 20 stars. 🤤

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