by LadyCypris
Liked this, a lot!
Made sense that she had been in a frustratingly aroused state for a while, going without for too long, which is what lead to her unwanted orgasm.
But it seems like a basic basic No No for a woman to say "fuck you" to her captor...you know? She's essentially bringing the subject up for exploration herself. But perhaps her youth and inexperience hasn't given her the ability to choose her words more wisely. I wonder how much more trouble she will make for herself due to her rash words? You've set that part of her character up nicely.
Well done.
Sounds like it could be an interesting series....some nice galactic futuristic ideas...go for it! Look forward to more....
You write extremely well. You put great detail and imagination into it while making sure it's hot. Kudos 'Cyp.