All Comments on 'Captured in Space!'

by LadyCypris

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LadyPartsLadyPartsover 10 years ago
Promising!

Liked this, a lot!

Made sense that she had been in a frustratingly aroused state for a while, going without for too long, which is what lead to her unwanted orgasm.

But it seems like a basic basic No No for a woman to say "fuck you" to her captor...you know? She's essentially bringing the subject up for exploration herself. But perhaps her youth and inexperience hasn't given her the ability to choose her words more wisely. I wonder how much more trouble she will make for herself due to her rash words? You've set that part of her character up nicely.

Well done.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
A Good Start..

Sounds like it could be an interesting series....some nice galactic futuristic ideas...go for it! Look forward to more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Really good, I'd love to read more!

Quiet_WandererQuiet_Wandererabout 1 year ago

You write extremely well. You put great detail and imagination into it while making sure it's hot. Kudos 'Cyp.

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Hi, I mostly just read the NC and incest stories here. :) Any feedback on my stories, including negative ones, are very welcome!