by Kripto
I wasn't sure I was going to get into it early on. The more I read, the more I liked.
This is really good. I figured I’d enjoy it after reading your Shudder series. I hope you keep writing!
Even though I would have liked to see a few more women get copied in this , and maybe Casey or Mom being replaced , you have most definitely became my favorite author!
Yeah I had originally thought about making this a series but wanted to do a one and done after Shudder. I will be starting a new series very soon though.
That's two great stories in a row, count me another who's regarding you as one of their favs.
And to promise another series too :)
Keep up the good work
There are a lot of mind swap / body swap stories, but yours is completely original. Very wild concept. Enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait for more.
And it dealt with responsibilities and consequences.
Fantastic story!
I enjoyed your creativity. Your story was something different. I really enjoyed it.
Nicely done. A great story and I appreciate that there are almost no typos as well. Thank you
Despite it not being my taste of "debauchery" (I.e.: crossing the gay incest threshold). I found it rather entertaining as a non-erotic story. I particularly enjoyed the twist of the awesome magic item becoming the cursed family heirloom.
However I don't agree with how the story ends. Unlike his father, Brian has the reciprocation of his Crush and the trio of shapeshifters confirmed she wants to have a sexual relationship with him. So I find it odd that Brian is willing to sacrifice his best friend's very existence so that the girl that I already really likes him will be subservient to him. (Perhaps this is a genre specific mentality?)
I would find it more likely that he would keep the mirror and make his friends forget they ever knew it existed; allowing him to keep it a secret, keep his best friend, and enjoy future debauchery!
I loved the story, but I was just curious what would have happened if he had "completed" the transformations of all three friends' copies of the girl? Identical triplets?
This was an incredible read! I loved the part where the brother pretended to be the sister. What a beautiful deception!
So he basically murdered two people so he could have his Stepford Wife... That was a great story with a really yucky aftertaste.
One of the times I truly can say "I read it for the plot" and mean it. That was an impactful story.