by Kripto
One of the times I truly can say "I read it for the plot" and mean it. That was an impactful story.
So he basically murdered two people so he could have his Stepford Wife... That was a great story with a really yucky aftertaste.
This was an incredible read! I loved the part where the brother pretended to be the sister. What a beautiful deception!
I loved the story, but I was just curious what would have happened if he had "completed" the transformations of all three friends' copies of the girl? Identical triplets?
Despite it not being my taste of "debauchery" (I.e.: crossing the gay incest threshold). I found it rather entertaining as a non-erotic story. I particularly enjoyed the twist of the awesome magic item becoming the cursed family heirloom.
However I don't agree with how the story ends. Unlike his father, Brian has the reciprocation of his Crush and the trio of shapeshifters confirmed she wants to have a sexual relationship with him. So I find it odd that Brian is willing to sacrifice his best friend's very existence so that the girl that I already really likes him will be subservient to him. (Perhaps this is a genre specific mentality?)
I would find it more likely that he would keep the mirror and make his friends forget they ever knew it existed; allowing him to keep it a secret, keep his best friend, and enjoy future debauchery!
Nicely done. A great story and I appreciate that there are almost no typos as well. Thank you
I enjoyed your creativity. Your story was something different. I really enjoyed it.
And it dealt with responsibilities and consequences.
Fantastic story!
There are a lot of mind swap / body swap stories, but yours is completely original. Very wild concept. Enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait for more.
That's two great stories in a row, count me another who's regarding you as one of their favs.
And to promise another series too :)
Keep up the good work
Yeah I had originally thought about making this a series but wanted to do a one and done after Shudder. I will be starting a new series very soon though.
Even though I would have liked to see a few more women get copied in this , and maybe Casey or Mom being replaced , you have most definitely became my favorite author!
This is really good. I figured I’d enjoy it after reading your Shudder series. I hope you keep writing!
I wasn't sure I was going to get into it early on. The more I read, the more I liked.