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ladykittenladykittenabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Many thanks, EdwardMidwestern! I'll be sure to enlist an editor next time. I'm just shocked and pleased that it was accepted! :D

EdwardMidwestonEdwardMidwestonabout 12 years ago
Winner

Good story, characterization, and pacing. There are a typo or two that could be cleared easily but let's not split hairs. A damn good start fora first effort

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