by SMFlint2021
I don't get why he just abandoned her for weeks when they'd already made a great connection. She needed emotional support and because she didn't get it from him, she ended up having an affair with a married man then got fucked by a bunch of Tinder chads. Anoushka knew what it was like being in a shit relationship... why make her suffer more? Lots of casual sex with randoms just wrecks a person's ability to pair bond, so he wasn't doing her any favours.
Also, if sounded like she was having fertility issues, but she wasn't sterile. If he spent years loading her up without any pressure to conceive, they had a decent chance of having a child naturally. I think that would've been a better ending, with Anoushka married to him and pregnant with their first child.
You're an excellent storyteller even without the good sex. I gave it a rare, for me, 5. Thank you.
You're a regular comedian. Giggling tits. that's funny. Yeah, I get you're a Brit, but the tale is woeful, and it's not jiggling.
Good luck next time around.
Fresh, right in so many ways about relationships, amusing, hardly pornographic but it didn't suffer because of that.
Well written too!
Great story, I enjoy your writing style as it is easy to read and the story flows smoothly.
Thanks