All Comments on 'Car Fucked'

But for a first submission very good. I would make comments about forgetting his brother, but I have nearly done the same. Keep writing and enjoy your words

WTF is wrong with you?! Just because someone wears glasses doesn't mean they have special needs! And the use of Dean and Sam? Are you a fan of Supernatural? Because you did a piss poor job of portraying them in this if you are.

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No back story, no build up, no foreplay, just bend her over and fuck her up the ass. I guess it is a pretty hot fantasy. Unusual to say her asshole was like a well used vagina, not too tight. Most of the stories go on about how tight it is, and how hard it is to get it in. It makes a better masturbation fantasy. Lots of typos and punctuation errors. "Threw" the door instead of through. And "to" instead of too. Etc.

Dude. Sam and Dean, brothers? '69 Black Mustang? You totally ripped off Supernatural.

No stars.