All Comments on 'Car Pool Ch. 01'

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anonintexas1999anonintexas1999over 9 years ago
the commute was lovely and then

The ending was REALLY delicious. Look forward to seeing more

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
wow

Please continue very soon. Story is great welcum back to the fold. Mike needs to get this done. Need to read the details, your good..

mcollectmcollectover 9 years ago
I'll second what anonintexas1999 said

Wonderful especially the ending!

HHCongerHHCongerover 9 years ago
Yep

Can not wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You NEED to write more.

The beginnings of something awesome. I know it's been so long, but if you ever get back to it, please keep writing. This was awesome, and the build up was fantastic.

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