All Comments on 'Car Teasing'

What a masterpiece! Your writing is fantastic :)

Interesting interaction.

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Love your descriptions and story pace. you got me very warm!

Amazing storytelling!

It seemed like the beginning of a longer story and then it just ended. Too bad. It had real possibilities.

Really descriptive without getting bogged down in unnecessary detail. Sexy and exciting, yet familiar and affectionate. Well paced. Just really good all round. Well done.

Yes, yes, YES.,. God, that was amazing!

Interesting premise.

But much too rushed.

Much too abrupt beginning of handjob.

Needed preliminaries.

Needed dialog about what she was planning to do to him. Needed her to tell him and then ask him if that sounded good?

Needed some breasts involvement. Even if only discussing what kind of bra she was wearing (or wasn't wearing), and how sensitive her breasts were, and how in need of attention they were.

Three stars.

Agree needs moreforeplay. Hot!

Agree with SummerCrush - amazing! Great writing - very very erotic. More please!