All Comments on 'Car Trouble'

Really, pretty hot. Enjoyed it.

00-Same old sick fetish. Wanting a bastard to be brought up by someone who isn't the father that is just sick.

What a total piece of crap! She is anything but, in fact, she is definitely not a loving wife, she's a slut whore bitch, who is committing the ultimate disrespect to her husband, giving him a bastard child to raise.

F@#$%*& hot were the first two words that came to mind. This this lovely piece of milf has to be taken by others no? Someone has got to find out. The non-consentual possibilities are endless. Horny, aged coworkers, confidants, clergy, physicians, relatives, even Sam and the bartender are just some of the possibilities. Let us oldtimers read about our fantasy milf again and again. Thank you.

She has to get caught for having all of the sex she had. Maybe if one of the guys were from another race than she is, and she delivered a half-cast baby. Her husband then would know his wife wasn't as saintly as she lets on to be.

For those of you blowing a gasket over this story, I guess you didn't notice the opening comment of "THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION" You idiots act like it really happened. IT DIDN'T! Get out of your fantasy world and judge the story thusly. Don't discourage someone's work because this isn't your thing. It's about the author work not your preference of story.

Typical 4th grade fantasy material with a dog shit plot development and missing character definitions. Get real and get some help. Fantasy or not - this was simply "poorly" constructed and is a total waste of space.

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Author - what is up with the 4th grade writing level? Are you trying to copy JPB's garbage?

delivered the divorce?

Half the time it was hard to figure out who was talking. Also wrong category. Should have been in Rape category.

I can’t think of anything to say about this POS that hasn’t already been said.

Just bad, what else can I say.