All Comments on 'Careful What you Wish For'

Scary and sexy - good combo. Nice, readable language.

It's so spooky and so soft 😭 I love it!!!

Another wonderful story. It was quite enjoyable, rather sexy, and, I think, better than the previous one. I hope you craft more tales and I look forward to reading them.

I was skeptical after the first part. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it. But it struck me as kinda softcore? Well, as softcore as noncon can be. Let me tell you, I was thrilled to read this part. Such a huge turn on. There was no doubt in my mind that "Miguel" was the perpetrator. I would love to know a man like that lol

As far as the actual writing, grammar, vocabulary, etc. This is put together quite nicely. It's an easy read. So many stories on here are broken English and typos. All around this is a fantastic read and you're a fantastic author

@Anonymous

Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it! English isn't my first language, so being complemented on my writing means a lot to me!

Love it.