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My weight fell back on my hands as my vision cleared, and I gasped for breath. Molly was also panting, although when I looked down and saw my come splattered all over her chest as she painfully removed the clamps from her nipples, my cock twitched as if I hadn't just had the most intense orgasm of the last several years.
"F-f-fuck," I said.
Molly laughed; a long, wonderful, cathartic laugh that sounded like music. "No, I don't think so. Not tonight. But you could go get me a warm washcloth," she said, rubbing my come into her skin.
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I fell over into bed within minutes of Molly leaving. I'd feebly tried to invite her to spend the night, but she declined and I didn't push the issue. I was exhausted, and still feeling a little goofy after that mind-blowing orgasm, but in the best possible way. If this was how Molly "running the show" was going to go, I was more than happy to follow along.
Sure, there were still some details that needed to be worked out, and she hadn't actually answered all of my questions so I was going to have to remember to bring that up again at some point. But you'd have to say, so far, we seemed to be working pretty well together. Okay, that was a ridiculous understatement; never mind how well we already knew each other, Molly was rapidly turning into the best play partner I'd ever had. She was hot as hell, incredibly responsive, gave insanely good blowjobs, and somehow we shared a bunch of the same kinks as well.
This was going to work out fine. And that's not to mention how much she likes my writing.
I turned off the bedside lamp and quickly slipped into unconsciousness, with only a few select images fluttering across my memory as I fell asleep.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoSeems like just lighthearted fun between them except for her undercurrent. No sense of anything except physical play yet, although it is bubbling under the surface. Who is really on top here, if either? Time will tell. Want to delve more into her rationale/backstory...
C.H. Darkstriderover 2 years agoI promised you a review of this story and I always follow through on my promises. On the technical angle, you are right where you need to be! After reading both chapters, I have not spotted any issues with the composition of the story! Everything is where is should be and I have yet to spot a single mistake! Well done!!
As far as the story goes, there is the trope of guy longing for girl and he's kind of sad that he doesnt get her, but you've taken that angle and given it an entirely new spin! Bravo!! Not a fan of how Molly is so flighty about things, but you alluded to there being a reason for that, which I do hope you dive into! I also like the fact that Nick isn't a total pushover either! He's not a Beta male in that sense, but he's not a Gamma male either. I'ike to see how his character evolves as the story marches on.
Now as far as the sex aspect goes, I never really took to BDSM, but you've piqued my interest in it! Reading the story had me going in ways that were more than a little interesting! Consider me interested in seeing how this story plays out! I hope to read more soon! Cheers!!
