All Comments on 'Caribbean Sirens Ch. 01'

I didn't even know stories this short were allowed.

Not a bad start. I plan on following your story. May I suggest you ignore the people who don't realize that all novels start with a "Chapter 1". Again, as long as you continue to write a good story I will read it. Good Luck

Pls moderate boards if members are so infantile. A first time writer submitting a fun and sexy chaper one shoudnt be targeted like this.

Hey, let me know when the movie comes out for this (ahem) novel and I can watch it along with the commercial breaks.

Is this a joke?

I don't get it. It's bad enough this so called novel is barely beyond the 750 word minimum requirement to post a story here, forget about the 7,500 minimum word requirement to post a story in the novel category, but the fact that this story earned a Green E is beyond me.

Am I missing something? Is reading this story like looking at a piece of modern art? Is less written really more?

Please, someone enlighten me.

One page is now regarded as a novel? Ah, now I get it, it is a story written by a mentally challenged person for other mentally challenged readers who can not concentrate on more than one page.

What a wonderfulllllllll idea

Since when is an 838 word story put in the novel category?

I thought the requirement was that a story must have 7,500 words and more to be put in his category.

Who did you pay off to earn a green E? Or are you sleeping with Laurel? Give me a break.

Well, to be honest, from what I read of you story, it sucks and I voted accordingly.