All Comments on 'Caribbean Vacation Fantasy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Beautiful

Very nice story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Really enjoyed the story. Is there more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Evocative

Well written. I enjoyed all 3 chapters very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love watching

I love watching my wife get very horny especially if she sucks a guys cock then kisses me with cum still in her mouth

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WOW!

Just far too many unneeded Words??

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Is

She look like a slut, she talk like a slut, she ack like a slut. She damn sho am a slut.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 1 year ago

Delightful story. Very sexy. Very romantic. I would love to see you revisit these characters, ten to thirteen years later. Have they changed? Do they still play together? What if time separated them, but they bumped into each other in the Caribbean on vacation? What if the “coincidence” had been arranged by Mary?

Personally, I would love to see Lynn and Mary go down on each other. That seems inevitable.

And, I would also love to see Lynn lube her submissive hubby’s ass to have it an amen by Mary’s hubby. That seems unlikely. You won’t take it that far…so I did.

This is a sweet, sexy, romantic story. It’s crystalline perfect. Coming back to it to add deeply nasty twists is probably a bad idea. But one I wanted to share.

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