All Comments on 'Carla's Affair'

Interesting concept but you do need an editor as it appears English is not your native language. "Making sport" is not something English speakers normally say, but in teaching ESL I've found it a common mistake in several ethic groups. Usually it is "playing a sport" or "doing a sport." Many many such errors, just get an editor.

Also the progression is a bit ragged and unbelievable, but again, an editor can help you clean that up.

Good ideas and you should keep writing.