All Comments on 'Carlene Ups the Ante'

Adele, Carlene, George and Tom...

I'm not a used car dealer, I prefer to drive my own vehicle only.

Something about the auctions and the multiple envelopes seems like a story that I've read before.....

But even a great editor wouldn't have saved this mess. They're basically prostitutes. Diseases will follow soon if jail doesn't get them sooner. They are unlikable, stupid people. Nothing sexy or erotic about what they're doing. Badly thought out drivel.

1 star

This story is already been told. The only difference between the two was the ending where the whore rides off into the sunset with a new money man .

Just everybody is fucking oh so discreet and special (rich) people and the sex is wonderful and caring and explosive and . . ., wow, its almost like a dream. For someone who has lots of fantasies and no experience with promiscuity, and prostitution, with strangers.

I guess an adequate stroke story, but totally absurd and disinteresting. Take the time and effort to write something more realistic and compelling. This was depressing.

A pair of fools who will soon get the nasty end they deserve.