All Comments on 'Carmen - Hunted and Double-Teamed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I really 'get' Carmen's point of view. My son is in his twenties and I've slept with two of his friends. It started with a game of strip poker fueled by a lot of wine. My son said that he thought was it was so hot that after he jerked off watching, he videoed the three of us on his phone! My husband doesn't know about ti and I'll never do it again. But I watch the video my son made whenever I need to get excited for my husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
great!

thank you! very hot story!

please, continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5

Now to Anon, please tell your story to a Lit author to get it posted. This author would be a good one.

sandbankssandbanksalmost 8 years ago
Another kinky and erotica twist

I like the way rxm76 develops the characters. The writer picks up from where the characters are left at, previously. And gives them more erotic characterization.

charliebillcharliebillalmost 8 years ago
Nice story

This just needs some bareback sex involved!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

is there gonna be a next part?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Anonymous, why did you do it?

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

OK. Let's let Martin watch and the maybe join in . . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Amazing!! My mother isn't what you'd call a hot mom! Infact she's almost 70 but that didn't stop my friends fucking her last new years eve! I converted my garage into a bar and had friends and family over for new year, everyone was really drunk including my mother! Someone suggested that we play a game, it was a bit like truth or dare,myself my wife Danny my mother and two of my friends Andrew and Carl were the only ones left, right Carl said this is one for the ladies ! Brenda (my mother) and Danny! Have you ever had a threesome? Danny laughed, well cmon ladies yes or no? My mother bit her lip and said that she had! Omg Brenda you total slut Danny called her laughing of course, Danny I need an answer please? Oh alright yes I have too she said, with my son I hope my mother said? Who else would it be with Brenda? That's OK then mum said! Next question Carl says, do you like anal sex ladies? Can we have another question please Danny asked? It's only a bit of fun Danny my mother said cmon! Well I do mum said infact I love it! Correct answer Brenda Andrew said laughing, it's ok Richard has told us that he puts it up your bum Danny!! Excuse me she said, he said that? Ask him yourself Danny, wait until tomorrow morning you Danny said to me, I've got a question for the boys my mother said, who's got the biggest dick of all of you? Mum I said! Well you asked us some rather rude questions so now it's our turn to ask you boys! What do you say Danny? It's only fair so I agree with Brenda! So you want us to get our cocks out Andrew said? I can't see through jeans can I mum said? Andrew and Carl stood up and pulled their jeans down then their underwear, I knew that Carl had a big cock because the threesome id had with Danny was with him! Andrew's cock was impressive too and my mother laughed saying it's a close one I think I'll have to take a closer look Danny! Mum got up from the sofa and went to the boys! God there's nothing in it Danny before taking a cock in each hand wanking them off! Omg Brenda my wife said! Oh cmon Danny mum said and anyway Richard hasn't got his out yet! Danny looks at me as if to say something but I didn't then put her drink down and started undoing my belt! Fuck me this is mad babe I said looking over to see my mother wanking my two friends off! Carl then told mum that he'd had a threesome with Danny and myself! Did you like his cock Danny my mother asked her just before she took it in her mouth? I'll let you be the judge of that Brenda, I'll take that as a yes then Danny? I was to engrossed in watching Danny sucking my cock to notice that my mother had got undressed and as I looked over Carl was pulling her knickers down! I was having a blowjob watching my mother getting fucked by two of my friends! You did say that you loved your arse being fucked Brenda Carl said? Yes I did mum answered looking at me getting my cock sucked, arhh yeah push it all the way in she said! I had Danny bent over the sofa fucking her from behind then Andrew came over and offered Danny his cock to suck, happy new year mum shouted out getting fucked in the arse by Carl, it was a little uncomfortable when mum came across to us and bent over the sofa next to Danny! Andrew took my place fucking Danny and Carl fucked my mother, I was the other side of the sofa wanking

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...