All Comments on 'Carmen, My Naughty SisteriIn "Love"'

WTF with the upside down ? Kind of lame

Made no sense at all. You kept mixing up the male and female pronouns. It must have lost something in translation.

"In next chapters. "

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

boring

Just wondering if maybe English isn't your first language. It seems like maybe a story was simply put through a translator and your meanings don't really come across very well. Nice concept though!