All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 04'

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cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 10 years ago
good update.

hope you can post regularly again.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 10 years ago
Just love this

His arrogance, her fighting spirit,

Just excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
lovely

stunningly lustful. Really enjoyed the read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love

I love this. There's something about historical romances. It makes me think that Charlotte Bronte was probably imagining something along these lines in Jane Eyre but could never have gotten away with it back then. Beautifully written.

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Wonderful story so far. Can't wait for lesson number two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Epic

Just loving this! You are very talented! Cannot wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
YIPPY!

Thanks so much for updating. I eagerly await Chapter 5! My goodness Emmeline you certainly know how to weave a tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
enjoying this so far

I'm really enjoying this so far! Update soon!

CentiCentialmost 10 years ago
Wonderfully written!

Wonderfully written: I’ve just discovered this series, and it stands out from the others. I already had HisPet21, WaterBurn, ablondegoddess, Darlin92, and titania123 in my favourites list, you just got added to the (elite) club!

Thanks and keep up the good work!

Centi

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

She may have submitted to him but don't make her love him or accepting his wrong doings easily. She has to, at least in some point, make him taste his own medicine. You're very good writer Emmeline. One of the best :D

LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 10 years ago
Well done!

Enjoyed this chapter as much as the others. LookiNg forward to the next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
great story

Please continue and don't make us wait to long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I love how this story is developing =) can't wait to see where it progresses to. Thank you for sharing.

long_legs2ulong_legs2uover 9 years ago
my kind of story

Waiting patiently for your next chapter.

kris10ekris10eover 9 years ago
And then I happened to stumble upon this delightful little read....

You are an amazing writer, and I am very intrigued in finding out just how far he will push her, teach her, and show her his world. How long it will take for her to fall, and exactly where she will fall. What of the other employees, and just how they will begin to treat her, if and when they discover her new little secret. Hopefully she will stay clear of Georgie....lol. Very good indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More Please!

ram

magevmagevover 9 years ago
More, please?

You write so well, won't you please continue this story and bring it to a satisfying finish? I need to see this non-gentleman put in his place! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What a treat!

The way you write is just exquisite. Subject aside, you are a veritable wordsmith.

evonnaevonnaabout 9 years ago
So sensual... a really yummy read..

can't wait to get to the rest of this.. xxx

nzf3254pnzf3254palmost 9 years ago
Very nice

Well done, looking for the next segment

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 7 years ago
The plot thickens

Readers to this point may well wonder if this earl will soften, since we see he appears to not want to be so harsh with her and when he certainly washes her and feeds her, his actions demonstrate this may be the case; he may be a bastard, but we have to remember what set him off was his former wife threw her dalliances in his face and now it's poor Eliza paying for his former wife's affairs. She now realizes she can possibly control him and this knowledge flickers in her mind now. Where will it lead? We will have to wait and see.

Most definitely a 5.

cpark1170cpark1170over 2 years ago

I wish this was a complete work. It's very good no it's awesome.

netgnosticnetgnosticabout 2 years ago

Just a quibble ... but the fact this story is set in England makes your American spellings of behaviour, colour, realise, honour etc. kind of stand out, in a weird way. Also, teats rather than tits would suit the century better.

I love your writing anyway!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He's not a good man, but I'm still swooning over the earl...

lolololitalolololita5 months ago

Finally, a real slow-burn non-con story!! Love it

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On again, off again writer of smutty romance. I’m sorry Carnal Knowledge isn’t finished. Maybe someday.

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