All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 04'

Finally, a real slow-burn non-con story!! Love it

He's not a good man, but I'm still swooning over the earl...

Just a quibble ... but the fact this story is set in England makes your American spellings of behaviour, colour, realise, honour etc. kind of stand out, in a weird way. Also, teats rather than tits would suit the century better.

I love your writing anyway!

I wish this was a complete work. It's very good no it's awesome.

Readers to this point may well wonder if this earl will soften, since we see he appears to not want to be so harsh with her and when he certainly washes her and feeds her, his actions demonstrate this may be the case; he may be a bastard, but we have to remember what set him off was his former wife threw her dalliances in his face and now it's poor Eliza paying for his former wife's affairs. She now realizes she can possibly control him and this knowledge flickers in her mind now. Where will it lead? We will have to wait and see.

Most definitely a 5.

Well done, looking for the next segment

can't wait to get to the rest of this.. xxx

The way you write is just exquisite. Subject aside, you are a veritable wordsmith.

You write so well, won't you please continue this story and bring it to a satisfying finish? I need to see this non-gentleman put in his place! :)

ram

You are an amazing writer, and I am very intrigued in finding out just how far he will push her, teach her, and show her his world. How long it will take for her to fall, and exactly where she will fall. What of the other employees, and just how they will begin to treat her, if and when they discover her new little secret. Hopefully she will stay clear of Georgie....lol. Very good indeed!

Waiting patiently for your next chapter.

I love how this story is developing =) can't wait to see where it progresses to. Thank you for sharing.

Please continue and don't make us wait to long.

Enjoyed this chapter as much as the others. LookiNg forward to the next.

She may have submitted to him but don't make her love him or accepting his wrong doings easily. She has to, at least in some point, make him taste his own medicine. You're very good writer Emmeline. One of the best :D

Wonderfully written: I’ve just discovered this series, and it stands out from the others. I already had HisPet21, WaterBurn, ablondegoddess, Darlin92, and titania123 in my favourites list, you just got added to the (elite) club!

Thanks and keep up the good work!

Centi

I'm really enjoying this so far! Update soon!

Thanks so much for updating. I eagerly await Chapter 5! My goodness Emmeline you certainly know how to weave a tale.

Just loving this! You are very talented! Cannot wait for more!

Wonderful story so far. Can't wait for lesson number two

I love this. There's something about historical romances. It makes me think that Charlotte Bronte was probably imagining something along these lines in Jane Eyre but could never have gotten away with it back then. Beautifully written.

stunningly lustful. Really enjoyed the read!

His arrogance, her fighting spirit,

Just excellent.

hope you can post regularly again.