All Comments on 'Carnival'

you write great stories, but would love to see you lengthen them into series. i would love to read more

Well done. I enjoyed your writing very much, and your infusion of classical writing with a modern telling was unique. I think the epilogue lost me to be honest, especially resorting to a term like "bootylicious" when it's clear your grasp of the english language is far above it, but all and all I look forward to reading more from you.

Excellent writing skills and so mysteriously juicy! I loved it. :)

I will remember this one a long time.Thank you so much. -Brent