All Comments on 'Carnivale Dreams'

I must say, this was not only interesting in the way the telling was a view other than the usual 3rd person, but the plot line really pulled me in. I say an overall success; there was an abundance of discription, yet not over done. Too bad I can only give this 5 stars, it deserves more.

I love your story BelleSimone. I'm an old school Table top Dungeons and Dragons roleplaying gamer. I wish to use this story as my characters background and personal story. But I need a few details.

1) Does the clothing the main character come here with change? Or are they still males clothing.

2) Does the passport and photo change? Or is there going to be an adventure traveling through dangerous territory and eventually sneaking across the boarder.

3) Family members...Do their memories change to adjust to the main character now being female?

4) Who is Kala to wield such power? A goddess perhaps?

I loved your story. =)

I would love to go to Rio and be changed into a female but I would like to go further with a man by sucking his love stick and drink down his seed

good shit

that story was very magical