by gauchecritic
Not a category I frequently read, this was quite interesting. The first paragraph is probably the weakest (an unfortunate confusing use of the word "it") and you repeat the word "shorts" unnecessarily (read my Nude Contest entry...LOL!!) But, this gets better as it moves along and is oh so British (or Australian). Thanks for the refreshing change from the typical son and mum incest story...a very easy "5"!!
For my own foreign exchange student? *grin* This story has such wonderful twists and turns. The video watching scene was incredibly hot, and while it could have been confusing, you managed to juggle it all and make it look effortless. You don't see too many incest stories with older "mum" and older daughter like this... quite refreshing (and did I mention hot? :)
The erection meter stayed at full for the whole story. More of this one please
Fun read Gauche. Never knew what I was missing. Good luck in the contest.
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