All Comments on 'Carol & the Carpet Guy Ch. 01'

Did you forget to finish it or to submit the entire story?

Just wondering - Why have you posted this on an erotic story website in "anal"

Nothing erotic - NO anal - Shame the rating system does not include a zero

I read this before there were any comments, I came back to see if there were any and now there are. When I read it and came to the end I was like WTF. It would appear that I am not alone with my conclusion.

This story has 4 parts. Sorry if you wanted "anal" in the first chapter, but unless the story was taking place in a prison the anal needs some time to set up.

Awaiting part two, and the parting of the cheeks.

Why is this classified as Anal?

I am not the only user who hates story fragments. I call them writing exercises.

Please write a whole story, and then post it. You will receive praise, I promise.

There is not a man in the world as important as this author thinks HE is. The other chapters just aren't worth reading.