All Comments on 'Caroline's Adventure Story Ch. 01'

by alanhomerj

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

Dave Evans

I wish I had a wife like Caroline,looking forward to Chapter 2

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

Jerlovesii

Great description! love to be watching

Robert_Anthony over 2 years ago

Hi Alan

You have fantastic ideas, my wife loved this story... but I had to correct so much grammar for it to be readable. You should really consider getting a Literotica editor to help you out.

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Married man living in Yorkshire, senior manager by day, freak by night. My stories are all written for Ladies! They are all real people that have asked me to document their fantasies and desires. Most of the story direction is their request. If you want me to write yours, g...

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