- Romance
- Caroline's Karma
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Click hereAll it said was. 'You keep your money. I keep your daughter.'
- COMMENTS
1_Inquiring_mind3 months agoMy only suggestion would be that when you are referring to people the desired word is “their” not “there”… overall fun read.
Oldmantrucker5 months agoDont care who didnt like any part of it., Tuff.. your not the writer.. got a problem with a story? Write Your own, no problem right.. easy.. right? Well? Me.. i cant write one worth shit.. but i Do love reading them, and Thanks by the way , 4 ur storys.. hope u stick ard a while longer. Lots of the other "old timers" seem to be retireing from here.. so thk u writer and happy new year 2 u.. and to All 🤷👌👌😁👋👍🍺🍺🍺🍕🍕happy new year
01Timber676 months agoWhy was she hurt after he gave her the ring,, there is so much that I think was left out of this story,,, 4⭐️
rbloch667 months agoA well crafted story... I quite enjoyed it. I am left confused as to what she was hurt by after he gave her the ring.
Ravey199 months agoWonderful. Loved the last sentence but that came around to quickly. A great story and thoroughly enjoyable.
robdh519 months agoLike others I'm a bit confused about several things. I get that the terrible thing that happened to her was the party. What I didn't get, again as others said, was the HOPE in the paintings and what it was that he held back from her? Never the less, 5 stars for a great story.
oldpantythief10 months agoI liked the story but was confused at time about what was going on. Can't fault a story for having a happy ending, and this one did. Thanks
AllNigher12 months agoMeanderlwc, ditto. Felt the same way but it was still a very enjoyable story. I'd like to rest the one with the extra stuff that was added to or simply skipped though.
