by bluemirrortree
Would have been infinitely hotter if she wasn’t at heart just a cheating whore. Make her divorced or a widow and you get a much higher rating.
having a typo in the few words of the short description is definitely not a good start...
I couldn't get passed the third paragraph. You need an editor or at least a proofreader.
I enjoyed it immensely, and there's room for some continuation chapter(s).
"Sorry, dad, but if I get the chance, I'm going to fuck your pretty little wife."
This was so unrealistic I just laughed and laughed.
I just loved the buildup to the love between a horny mother and the son she loves. So beautiful it made me wish it had happened for me!
I liked it. Those who criticized this story read the story through their asses. Especially the dumbass who laughed. It was just as believable as a man or woman donning a mask and fighting crime.