All Comments on 'Carrie'

Great story!!

Good one!

With a bit more atmospheric description, this could have been a Ray Bradbury story.

Hot, but with a little twitch at the end.

Totally enjoyable.

thanks

Hot and sexy story! I loved the little ghostly twist at the end!

Short, Sweet, and well done with a nice twist.

That's not funny! ;-)

Interesting but need to add a little more almost there

A nice little twist on the 'I met a dead girl' type of story. You've gat a nice flow to your words, which makes for easy reading. Kep it up, and with a bit more detail, you might hit one out of the yard.

Loved the surprise ending!