All Comments on 'Carrie'

Agree. The rhythm of the seduction is perfect. You can feel the lust building. Two women who know what they want and need.

R

One of the best. Great exciting pace, great ride.

Hot story. Great way of writing. Keep it up.

THAT was explosive! WOW! Absolutely incredible story! Thanks so very much!

Bravo! Please continue! You have a flair and style in your writing that lends itself well to this kind of work.

C B i think that`s the juicest story ive heard the waitress was so great andthe woman was incredible will you continue with there fling will they turn it into a love affair or will the waitress quit her job and go with the woman become her assistant and get all the love from each other that they want.?

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

Delightful Asian - Caucasian erotic madness as two females get together and share themselves with each other. A terrific Read. A delightful story - the best part - to be continued.

While I usually don't read my friend's stories, I decided to go for it...good story, keep it up. (PS...it's me TT)

Please continue with this one. I'd love to hear what happened later...