All Comments on 'Carrie and John Pt. 01'

by aygoslow

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good start

Nice bit of scene setting. I am looking forward to the next part.

paulboypaulboyover 9 years ago
More Please !

Mmmmmm..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
An Excellent Start

An excellent and literate beginning to what I think will be an interesting and well-told story. Best of all, the story as told is realistic and believable. I'm looking forward to future installments

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hello CARRIE AND JOHN

WHERE"S PART 2 NOTHING HAPPENED?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I love how this one has started

Yummy! I love the pace and the way you are setting the scene for his surrender. Great setting, and characters. I can't wait to see what she does to him at that secluded beach house!

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