by aygoslow
Nice bit of scene setting. I am looking forward to the next part.
An excellent and literate beginning to what I think will be an interesting and well-told story. Best of all, the story as told is realistic and believable. I'm looking forward to future installments
Yummy! I love the pace and the way you are setting the scene for his surrender. Great setting, and characters. I can't wait to see what she does to him at that secluded beach house!