All Comments on 'Carrie Wants to Watch Mike'

Good premise.

Good beginning.

But when she decided to get involved with hm -- beyond watching -- it zoomed.

Why didn't she ask him if seeing her tits would help him? Her pussy?

what did they look like?

Why didn't she ask if she could touch his cock. And play with it?

And since he was watching blowjob porn, use her mouth?

Slow down. More details/specifics.

Four stars.

Great story. I hope you write more.

Amazing story! Please write more!

I really like whole story, with the exception of the end. Why does she just jump on him? As another commentator mentioned, taking it a bit more slowly would have been better. Maybe she would just have jerked him off? In any case, taking it slower in the very last part would have been better. But most of the story is really, really great!

not enough background and buildup, but I really liked this story

Very hot. Love the self facial into his open mouth. And her watching. I'm surprised she wasn't fingerings herself.

Very Nice

very nice. liked the dual internal perspective.

Nice premise.

But needed much more dialog during his masturbation. Carrie asking questions. Carrie giving directions. Carrie touching herself.

Three stars.

OK premise.

But he seems to have the largest cock she'd ever seen. And, at the same time seeing his cock and getting to play with it seemed to be new to her.

Rushed. Rushed. Rushed.

Two stars.